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40 years old
Texas
United States
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ARTIST TYPE: Poet
AVAILABILITY: Will travel more than 50 miles
MEMBER SINCE: 11/19/2008
STAR SIGN: Scorpio
LAST LOGIN: 01/05/2009 15:55:49
MY RATING: 0.00

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Im like a curb in the road,and I make the S Shape,
Zigzagging Lane's, On Race Tracks and Freeways.
Torn between two Place's, Like A Person in Operation,
Connected to different wires,Lying down on the Table.
God is my strength,As this explosion is trying to live,
I'm like a man walking barefoot,On top of pin's and needle's.
Torn Between Two Place's, Can I Initiate a suggestion,
Light up a cigarette,To ease the pain existing.
Picture a Lion,and its standing on a hill,
My Emotions Ambitons and Strength I can feel.
Like two dog's fighting,foaming at the mouth,
Ferocious Vicious animals,Stare in each other Eye's.
Torn Between Two Place's,Like I look off in the Mirror,
Turned Upside Down, is Double Images Appearing.
I'm Like A Man on the Side Walk,Sittin Down On the Concrete,
A Jacket With Different Patches,and Torn up into Pieces.
Torn Between two Places,Like A Camera when it flash,
A cold night on Hallowen,and I wear a Tribual Mask.
I make the Distinct Sound,The one that make you Wonder,
A Cup Falling Down in a Dark Room or Something.
Torn Between Two Place's,Im like A Man in Slow Motion,
Running Fast as I can,Going Backward Not Moving.
Torn Between Two Place's,I'm A Historian From The Future,
My Identity is A Symbol,over Answers in Confusion.
I'm Like A Man With A Back Pak,in Various Locations,
Carrying Hope For Everyone, Torn Between Two Place's......God Bless!

DaOnlyBlackLion has 8 fan(s)



Displaying 7 out of 7 reviews
From: Poetic_Angel
12/24/2008 21:32:05

Guess that makes two of us cause connection been like this for some days just getting worst. Thanks for taking the time to check them out








Poetic_Angel wrote:




Thanks for stopping by and the nice comments. I really appreciate it. By the way, you're not wasting my time. lol. I'm not doing anything special. I kept trying to leave review but it was taking long to add. I think it's because I have a bad internet connection right now. Take care



Wow! That's How I'm Feeling About My Internet Connection Right Now. So It May not be your's. but mine. Anyway I'm Fina Check Out Your Blog's For Inspiration..........Thank You Poetic_Angel, Keep Blessing The Spirit!


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From: Poetic_Angel
12/24/2008 20:54:55

Thanks for stopping by and the nice comments. I really appreciate it. By the way, you're not wasting my time. lol. I'm not doing anything special. I kept trying to leave review but it was taking long to add. I think it's because I have a bad internet connection right now. Take care



From: Poetic_Angel
12/24/2008 20:09:54

Stopped by to say hi. Will be checking out the blog while i'm here. Have a great evening



From: CommonUnity
12/14/2008 17:23:14

What are you looking to join. To join commonunity just request us as a fan. If you want to join one of the group forums just do so. There should be something to let you know how. If you have any other questions email me to commonunity of la_poeta page.

How Can I Join?

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From: GODSPOET
12/14/2008 15:51:27


DaOnlyBlackLion wrote:


Powerful Writing.........


thx and may god bless



From: Poetic_Angel
12/11/2008 15:43:57

nice write



From: jazzy
12/11/2008 10:52:39


DaOnlyBlackLion wrote:


You Are A Very Proficient Writer. " David " (ur poem) Has Aspireing Potential To Be A Play Well As A Movie. May God Bless you Jazzy..And Please Bring Us More Of The Fabulous Work.....



thanks 4 the comment



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