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POSTED BY: lrasco on Nov 16, 2008
"Between Us"

Here;... my deepest sulks,


 with aquatic eyes;


 my mind;


 so you know every thought.


Underneath flesh;


 my heart;


 beating only by the engine made from unmute lovers.


Shrinking;


 supported by simple wishes;


 an American boy I am.


Chained to the wilderness;


 thereof day and night regulate with a liquid,


bequeathing images;


arranging recurring antiutopia,


 between us.


 





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POSTED BY: terryrindaljr on Nov 26, 2008

Interesting.  I have a question though... "antiutopia" instead of "dystopia"?  Are you saying "arranging recurring" opposites of paradise, or "arranging recurring" bleak images of the future?  Just a thought. 

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