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JAZMIN

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18 years old
Prague, Oklahoma
United States
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ARTIST TYPE: Poet
AVAILABILITY: default
MEMBER SINCE: 12/01/2008
STAR SIGN: Aquarius
LAST LOGIN: 01/09/2009 14:05:48
MY RATING: 8.00

WRITING, LISTENING TO MUSIC, HANGING OUT WITH MY FRIENDS

I LIKE MOVIES THAT SCARE ME OR HAVE ALOT OF ACTION

R&B (ALICIA KEYS, ERYKAH BADU, NE-YO, JUST TO NAME A FEW OF MY FAVORITE ARTISTS)

THE MOST READING I GET DONE IS THE POEMS AND MESSAGES ON THIS SITE, LOL

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FREEDOM OF YOUTH, The gospel according to....., Anime Freaks, Animals' Lovers, LA_POETA COOKS

     
     







I DON'T WANT TO PUT A BUNCH OF USELESS THAT'S GOING TO BORE YOU ON HERE, SO IF IS THERE'S ANYHTHING YOU WANT TO KNOW JUST ASK ME.

This is my 1st poem It's about the person who inspired me to write poetry.

DAVID

It's up and down, in and out
Baby tell me what this is all about

It was all fine a week ago
But again a different person is beginning to show

Baby you know that I love you
And I thought that you love me too

Why are you treating me this way
Why are you making me feel this pain

Last night you weren’t with me in bed
And I couldn't sleep because you kept running through my head

I haven't heard from you in two days
And it's been four since I've seen your face

You don’t call me as much as you did before
I'm always the one dialing your number

And you don't always feel like talking when I call
I feel lucky if you pick up your phone at all

I remember people telling me that you were trouble
They told me I should let you go

They told me you were going to make me cry
I said I would always stay by your side

Everyone swore that you were going to break my heart
I thought they were just trying to keep us apart

Now I'm sitting at home alone
Staring at this clock wondering when you're coming home

I'm confused I don’t know what to do
I know I should go because I deserve better than you

I really just don't know what to do anymore
I've never felt this way about anyone else before

I thought that I had found true love
I thought that you were everything I've dreamed of

At first what we had was perfect
For that everything were going through now would of been worth it

I wish it could go back to how it used to be
Back to when I knew you were happy to be with me

I don't know how much longer I can deal with this pain
Holding on to you has left me physically, mentally, and emotionally drained

It hurts to get hit with your rejection
But when I tried to leave you said it was just my imagination

You asked me not to walk away from what we have
Knowing that it's nothing like what we had

You said you couldn't deal with us not being together
And you promised you would do anything to make it better

I didn't want anymore false words to leave your lips
And so you would say no more I let you give me a kiss

I chose to believe what I knew was lies
Then you wiped the tears from my eyes

Things between us were good for a little bit
Then it all went back to how it was before I threw my fit

I don't want to go through this cycle forever
We can't keep doing this over and over

Don't make me stay in this miserable existence
See it from my point of view if only for an instance

It's not good for me to stay with you
And there's something I need for you to do

I made up my mind and I think that you already know
That I'm asking you to release me, let me go



Displaying 10 out of 22 reviews
From: Taron
01/08/2009 11:14:01

Good poem He had u going crazy Huh



From: ziggyd
12/24/2008 13:47:38

I LOVED YOUR WRITTING



From: Lfujhay
12/20/2008 01:56:28

thanks for the review.

I dig your soulfull, sincere expressions.



From: D9to5
12/18/2008 18:08:34

Like your poem and Thanks for your review


 



From: flory429
12/17/2008 00:13:52

I really loved this poem, i can really relate to it, i think mostly all girls have. but we r survivors of pain. keep ur head up n keep writing, ur doing a great job. us poets, we were blessed with ways to use words to express ourselves and make us stronger



From: Poetic_Angel
12/16/2008 09:59:28

Hey, thought I would drop by to see how you're doing and all. Have a great day!



From: DaOnlyBlackLion
12/11/2008 10:50:49

You Are A Very Proficient Writer. " David " (ur poem) Has Aspireing Potential To Be A Play Well As A Movie. May God Bless you Jazzy..And Please Bring Us More Of The Fabulous Work.....



From: rene
12/11/2008 09:26:02

omg  that  was tight  i needed  that



From: Nabahood23
12/08/2008 22:13:22


Just a little reminder.


Jesus loves you
You know it is true.
Since Jesus loves you,
I must love you, too.


As always, may God bless all of us.



From: OneLovePS
12/08/2008 13:52:11

Hi jazzy. DAVID is a good read. proves the point that heartache and pain knows no age limit. once a person enters a relationship, he/she is probably gonna get hurt in one way or another. GREAT JOB! welcome to PW


1LOVE



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