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I may not be good but I'm getting better at it

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19 years old
Portland, Oregon
United States
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ARTIST TYPE: Poet
AVAILABILITY: Will travel w/in 50 miles radius
MEMBER SINCE: 12/01/2008
STAR SIGN: Aquarius
LAST LOGIN: 12/29/2008 15:21:33
MY RATING: 0.00

include but are not limited to, writing poems, obviously, basketball, football, video games, movies, hanging with friends, partying a little bit, going muddin, listening to music.. whatever sounds good I guess.

Action, horror, comedy, love and romance once in awhile is cool too. I like to watch movies with Adam Sandler, Will Smith, Reese Witherspoon, Tim Allen... few more but I forgot there names.

I listen to country, hip hop, rock and a little rap. Mostly country and hip hop to be honest.

I like reading poems, I usually get into mystery novels pretty quickly, or murder novels are always fun to read, romance novels are good if you get the right book too.

There was an ad for it on myspace and it caught my attention

     
     







Thats weird

Running outside I can feel the wind on my face and I know,
I'm luck to be alive today and the fact that my heart can grow.
After I feel apart I thought I would never be able to come back,
but I got over it and now I know that there is nothing that I lack.

My friends know that they can always count on me,
if they don't then it's something the should learn to see.
I love my family and would do anything for them all,
they've been the ones that have accepted me after my fall.

I was in an accident that focused my attention on important things,
like getting a job and getting ready to try and take the blame.
I'm suppose to be the responsible one and show my younger brother,
suppose to be the strongist woman and stand next to my mother.

My mom has to be the strongist woman that I've ever known,
she's been hard at times but love is what she has shown.
She's the rock that holds down anything in these crazy times,
always telling me that it's important to save even the dimes.

Then there is my dad who can't really be around much,
he's got a good job, going all around and driving a big truck.
He makes time to spend with us when he get to come in to town,
we miss him when he leaves but there is not reason to be down.

My little brother is a freshman now and he's maturing everyday,
we get along better then we use to being nice really does pay.
Now that he's older we don't do stuff like we use too,
at least we are still close if he asked me for anything thats what I'd do.

My friends have been great and they always seem to be near,
when I'm feeling down I know there is nothing to really fear.
We've stood through the breaking of our own great wall,
caught each other before we even knew we were going to fall.

Sometimes we take for granet our friend or our family,
guess it's time to forgive for that but question is can we?
You have to be able to put your trust in the hands of you,
giving it to someone is fine but then what do you do?

You can only trust someone if you can trust your self,
don't lock your self from everyone high up on a shelf.
The people who love you might not be able to reach,
don't take it from me I really don't mean to preach.

So I guess this is to all of those who think they are lost,
let someone you love know, how much could it cost?
I talked to my family and I even talked to my friends
I realize it's not healthy to lock up, it hurts u in the end.


By Debbie 8:20 om 09-16-07

mypoemsconsumeme has 1 fan(s)



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From: LA_POETA
12/04/2008 19:10:03

I know talent when I see it. If you need any questions answered feel free to ask away or anything else for that matter.




mypoemsconsumeme wrote:

Thanks for the review, have I joined the community? I don't really know lol, I'm still learning how to work this site!


~Debbie



From: LA_POETA
12/04/2008 10:48:19

LOVE WHAT YOU WROTE. ESPECIALLY THE LAST PHRASE, NOT HEALTHY TO LOCK UP, HURTS YOU IN THE END. LOVE THAT PHRASE. WELCOME TO PW, HAVE YOU JOINED COMMUNITY, IF YOU EVER WANT TO CHAT FEEL FREE TO EMAIL ME.



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